範文一:
The seed of the dream emerged from my journey to Hong Kong at the age of Kong, with its unique historical background, is home to residents from all over the world. It is Hong Kong’s diversification of global culture and good social order that attract me most. I have made up my mind to make my way to the dream destination, HKU, which is generally acknowledged as the best university in Asia where advanced educational philosophies, such as” the whole person education” are the main focus. This not only adapts to my personal character but broaden my horizon with an English-teaching atmosphere as well.
During my trip to the UK, the strong curiosity drives me to walk into every corner of the college in Oxford, however, what I get surprised most is the perfect preservation of the old architecture despite the long history. Compared to the situation in UK, China still has a long way to go, reflected from its poor architecture preserving system and the lack of cultural consciousness. Therefore, I deeply realize the importance of protecting the precious heritage and decide to devote myself into the Bachelor of Arts in Conservation Studies.
I grow up with a great sense of social responsibility. I used to be a volunteer served in the old people’s home. Every minute when I talk with those poor people do I find how much care and help they need from the society.(想用一個every time的倒裝句型,好像有些問題) Thus, with the courage and the persistence ,I consider it my responsibility to build up a better life for弱勢羣體。The Bachelor of Social Work in HKU provides me with a perfect platform to achieve my dream.
HKU, I am approaching you with enthusiasm, will you open the window for me?
範文二:
I’m a student of Zhejiang, hoping to study at Hong Kong University. I’m going to introduce myself and reasons for the choice as follow.
Above all, the strength is one of the major aspects to encourage me to apply for HK University. The self-control, extensive social skill, high sense of responsibility, strong organization ability is what I acquired from my high school. I have served as vice-minister of propaganda department of students’ union for a year. This precious experience enhances my ability of organization and social contacts,and makes me handle the balance between work and study well. What’s more, I have expansive interests such as painting, writing and playing volleyball. So, up till now I have participated in various activities and all gained good results. With all this things I have learnt, I truly find my connotation become rich and rich.
When comes to the reason why I choose HKU, the first thing occurs to me is the atmosphere. Hong Kong’s inherent Chinese and western culture has a powerful attraction on me. Only studying at HK, can I broaden my horizons at a more open and freedom stage. Anticipating a collision of concept, I cannot wait to take this challenge, because young heart will never satisfy.
In my eyes, HKU is a university with profound historical culture and free academic exchange. I’m a student of arts, and as far as I know, Hong Kong University’s faculty arts are pretty famous, for it is one of faculties that have the longest history and largest scale. All the advantages are just great enough to light my passion.
The youth is full of unexpected encounters, and I want to have a beautiful encounter with you—Hong Kong University.